kb115+Pet+Peeves


 * Thesis** (What You're Trying to Prove)


 * I believe that loud little children are very annoying.**


 * Three Reasons**
 * 1) **The children on my bus. Example: They bounce from seat to seat**
 * 2) **When children start singing songs non-stop. Example:They continuously sing row, row your boat**
 * 3) **They make block my way of getting off the bus . Example:The make bridges and yell PASSWORD!**


 * Facts/Experts/Opinion**
 * **Patricia Henderson Shimm says two year olds just testing their voice but the kids on my bus are 8 and 9.**
 * **Ohio state university says exposed to loud sound often can result in a tumor.**


 * Exaggerated Effects**
 * **Sometimes they are so loud I think my head might fall off.**
 * **When they talk to each other my head starts spinning.**

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 * Do you ever ride the bus in the morning and there are three kids sitting next to each other and screaming to talk? Or do you have a smaller sibling at home that screams every time they talk? One example I have experienced was the kids on my bus. They always seem to be bouncing from seat to seat singing songs.**=====

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 * Sometimes they are so loud that I feel that my head might fall off. I think if they were sitting there just listening to their selves they would feel very foolish. You would think that they would be thinking about how loud they are.**=====

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 * It is not just your headphones when you hear a lot of backround noises on the bus. It is the little kids. According to the School Of Public Health at The Ohio State University, people who are exposed to loud sound often are more likely to develop a tumor rather than someone who is not exposed to loud sounds.**=====

**The bus drivers need to come up with something in order to keep these kids quieter.**
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