rt115+Argumentative+Writing

==In our class, we read and watch __Island of the Blue Dolphins.__ The movie had many parts missing from the book. The new movie, //Hansel and Gretel,// got about $19 million dollars in its first week. Its theme... survival! Just like __Island of the Blue Dolphins__! Think about how much money you could make. I believe that the __Island of the Blue Dolphins__ movie should be remade.==

==With the new and improved technology, you could make the movie better. Now you can adjust the lighting much better nowadays, so you could make the setting just right. The Computer Generated Images, or CGI helped many movies get in tone. Maybe you could use that to add more excitement and effect to the movie. Even though some people think that some scenes might be too intense for children, like the tsunami part at the end of the book, you could always make it PG or PG-13. Nowadays, we have a large selection of music and better ways to make the movie smoother with it. The movie could be better with the technology.==

==Action-packed movies are loved by many people, so this would be a good reason to remake the movie. These scenes could make the movie better. The scene where Karana makes a huge fire in the dog's cave. Or maybe when Rontu fights the dogs along the cliff. Some people might think that this scene is too violent, but this scene would add a little bit of spice to the movie. What about the scene with Karana and her canoe trip to the mainland? That would add a lot more suspense. Adding more action would be great for this movie.==

==Making the movie "truer" to the book would make the movie a lot more popular. Adding the scene with the devilfish (A.K.A octopus) would be awesome! It would help answer a lot of question from the watchers, like this question - How did Karana repay Rontu after Rontu defends the house from the two wild dog leaders? Well, this scene will help. Ulape and Nanko characters would make the movie more breathtaking. Some parents might think that it might be inappropriate, but adding the would make it more ironic. Truer is always better!==

==Adding these scenes might be expensive, but will make the movie more excitement and popular. Don't you want to make your company more popular? This movie would help out a lot. To help get more money and popularity, you should remake the __Island of the Blue Dolphins__ movie.==

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