eb115+Argumentative+Essay

Dear Producer,
==I just finished reading __Island Of The Blue Dolphins.__ After we watched the movie. There were lots of main events missing from the book. For example, the tsunami, the sea elephant battle, and the devilfish seen. The movie may be a classic, but I think the movie should be remade for more modern audiences.==

==One reason I think the book should remade is that they left out the three most exciting events. One of the most exciting events was the tsunami. Another one of the most exciting events was the devilfish seen. Also, they left out the sea elephant battle. In conclusion, they should remake the movie with the exciting events that they left out from the book.==

==Another reason why they should remake the movie is because of the inconsistencies. One inconsistency was karana`s age. In the movie it does not even show her aging. She was on the island for 18 years. Another was the ship in the book is a canoe in the movie. Also, in the book they come back twice for Karana. In the movie they come back once. Some people may think that those little details like Karana`s age or the ship do not matter, but they do to me.==

==Another reason why they should remake the movie is because there is better technology now than back in 1964. For example they have better music now. Also, there are better special effects and CGI to show for example, the sea elephant battle or the tsunami. And they can use makeup to show age progression to help show how long she was on the island. Although they did not have technology back then like we do now, they can now improve on it by making key changes. In conclusion, they now can improve on things like music,special effects, and make up.==

==Even though some movies are very expensive to film, your company knows that hit movies can make a lot of money. Do you know how much of a hit __Island Of The Blue Dolphins__ could be? In conclusion, I think __Island Of The Blue Dolphins__ should be remade because it is missing key and exciting events, it is inconsistent to the book, and there is new technology that can help improve on key elements like music, special effects,and make up. I think that the movie could be a whole lot better if you improve on these things.==

Sincerely, Libby