fm115+Argumentative+Essay

==In our Reading Language Arts class at Bedminster School, we read the the book //Island of the Blue Dolphins//, by Scott O'Dell. We thought the book was outstanding. The movie was fantastic, too, but we think it could have been better. Our class knows that you did not have a high budget to include all of the action in the book. But now with all of this great technology and a higher budget, you would be able to include all of the great stuff in the book. Because of this, and many more reasons to come, please remake the movie.==

==One reason you should remake the reason is because of all of the new technology you have. Since the CGI has improved, you could add and make things better, like being able to take real video from the Island of the Blue Dolphins and insert it into the backround to make the setting look more genuine. You could also use the CGI to add in some intense battle scenes that you may not have been able to do before. With the new music making devices, you could put in better music and sound effects for animals. Some people may think that using this awesome stuff will make the battle scene too violent, but who says you have to show the entire battle? Just make a good start to the battle and make end quickly and just don't add a lot of blood. Using this technology could greatly improve the movie and make it more modern.==

==In the movie, there were many fantastic actors. But, casting, costumes, and make- up has greatly improved since the movie first came out in 1964. With this, you could make Karana and her tribe look more native, instead of making it look like there was a dry cleaners at Ghalas- at. Also, since its been eighteen years since Karana got stuck on the island, you could use the new make- up and costume breakdown techniques to make her look her actual age. I totally understand that you didn't have all of this great new technology when you first started making the movie, but now that you do, you can add the new make- up and aging to Karana to make the movie real.==

==When you guys first made the movie, you had a very low budget, so you werent able to include everything in the book. But now with a higher budget, you could add in many missing things. For example, Ulape and Nanko, two main characters, were missing. Another inconsistency was that the three main battle scenes were missing, which you would now be able to include. With this added, appealing and attractive to a variety of audiences.==

==Even though the movie //Island of the Blue Dolphins// was a great movie, you could make it much better with all of this new technology. It was a great movie at the time, but you could add in many more things, like the fight scenes and better make- up. You may be wondering if this movie would be worth the cost. Well, I think it would be fantastic because survival movies are all the rage. It was a fantastic movie back in the day, but now it would turn around into a big hit.==