mo115+agrumentetive+writing

=Dear producer,=

=In class, we read island of the blue dolphins. We also watched the movie. You should recreate the movie. I think that because you have the money to.= = = =First problem is that you need to change the actors. They where pretty bad. And they need to be more recitalist at that. The dad was to young. He was not old enough to be Karana's dad. Totok was to young she needed to be at least in her thirties.= = = =Another reason is for the movie be truer to the book. There was no devil fish that she went hunting for and that was my favorite part. There was no natural disaster like the earthquake. And there was no sea elephant fight. That would have made the movie a hole lot better.= = = =New technology is available now which could improve your movie. You could add 3-d effects to the movie. Newer filming and is new way to play the movie in dvd or blue-ray. Also there is newer animation like a green screen. That would have brought better ratings and more money to your pocket.=

=You could have made a longer movie by putting more in it. there was two white men's ship that came to the island to get her. Also you could have shone her going to the other land. And going across the ocean. You should have put Ulape in the movie. That would have made the movie a lot better.=

=Even thought you think you have a good movie you really don't. But If you are not reading this I guess you have to stick with your horrible movie. I Hope you read this instead of throwing it in the garbe, all I am trying to say to you is that you have to remake the movie.=