Kc415+Argumentative+Writing

Dear Producer,
==In our class we have read the book, //Island of the Blue Dolphins// as a class together and have watched the movie you have made for us. When watching the movie, I have seen several differences from the book. Even though this movie might have been popular in 1964, it won't be in our days where people want more action. The Movie you have created wasn't as good as it could've been but it can be better with improvements. My opinion on the //Island of the Blue Dolphins// movie should be remade.==

==One of my big changes that you should do is that there needs to be more action, I mean people nowadays want to watch movies with lots of action. Something you can do is adding the devilfish scene from the book; now that's a part in the movie I'd like to see. Also, adding a battle, maybe the seal elephant battle from the book as well but people may think it's too violent but you don't have to show all of it. Another thing you should add was the tsunami storm. Although this is a decent movie, you could've made it better with all these action scenes.==

==Another one of my many reasons is to take control of the technology today and make the movie a lot better. For example, to add CGI which means computer generated images, so having a greens screen. Even though people might see if it's fake or not, you guys can make it really realistic. Also, having better effects like a better setting or sounds effects. In this time period there is lots of good technology and you guys should really take advantage of it.==

==Better castings is one of the best reasons to remake the movie. For example, having a more popular girl as Karana so even little kids are attractive to this movie. Though parents may think there is too much violence to the movie the parents can tell the kids to close their eyes when the violent scenes are on. Additionally, maybe having a narrator should be someone with a great voice, like Morgan Freeman. Having more popular cast members will be expensive but the movie will make lots of money if it's successful.==

==Even though this movie will cost a lot after all the improvements, people will love this movie. Like you guys could be spending millions on this movie, but viewers will love this like Bella and Edward in Twilight. What would happen if this movie failed and wasted your money? Well make these changes and see what happens because I will be there in the seats first. For more money, more viewers, the movie //Island of the Blue Dolphins// ​should be remade.==