eb115+pet+Peeves


 * Thesis** (What You're Trying to Prove)

(I believe that) Little kids can be tool loud.


 * Three Reasons**
 * the little kids do not want to be quiet. EX: They scream when they are right next to each other
 * they do not understand that people are trying to do things other than listen to screaming and loud noises. EX:I was trying to do my hw and then the little kids start screaming.(I had it)
 * they don't realize they don't need to scream to be heard EX:They scream a lot. my ears start to pop because they are so loud

Patricia Henderson Shimm says that two year old s just want to test their voice. But the kids on my bus are 8 or 9 years old. http://www.babycenter.com/404_how-do-i-get-my-2-year-old-who-loves-to-shriek-to-turn-down_69257.bc
 * Facts/Experts/Opinions**

http://kidshealth.org/kid/talk/qa/rock_music.html


 * Exaggerated Effects**
 * _If we let this keep going, by 8 th grade my ears will fall off.
 * _Also, if we let this slide the windows on the bus will shatter.
 * _

=**The kids on the bus go scream, scream,scream**=

When did third and fourth graders become so loud on school buses?
===**Do you have little kids on your bus that are a really big annoyance? Do you ever feel like your ear drums are going to burst because it is really loud? Do you feel like the windows are going to shatter because it is so loud?**===

===**Also, they do not realize that people are trying to do things other than listen to screaming and loud noise. Once I was trying to do my homework then the little kids started to scream their heads off. I could not take it. We can not let this keep going.**===

**If we just let this problem slide, my ears will fall off by the time I graduate 8 th grade.**
http://www.babycenter.com/404_how-do-i-get-my-2-year-old-who-loves-to-shriek-to-turn-down_69257.bc
 * Source:**

http://kidshealth.org/kid/talk/qa/rock_music.html