cc115+Pet+Peeves


 * Thesis** (What You're Trying to Prove)


 * I believe that wet spots on the back of peoples shirts from their hair is annoying.**


 * Three Reasons**
 * 1) **It is disgusting to look at Example: Wherever I am, if a girl has a wet spot on her back I admittedly turn away**
 * 2) **It proves the person is lazy Example: If the person knows their hair is wet and doesn't even bother to at least put it in a ponytail.**
 * 3) **When you actually have it yourself it feels nasty Example: The wetness of the shirt sticks to your skin and makes your back wet.**


 * Facts/Experts/Opinions**

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 * Wendy Rose Gould says not to rub your hair to dry it but I think that you should at least put your hair up in a towel to dry or even pull your hair back in a bun. http://voices.yahoo.com/five-common-hair-mistakes-every-woman-makes-10905425.html
 * In the article " Wet hair as Fashion" they say wet hair is the new trend. Models, celebrities, and even regular people are buying products to make their look wet. I personally think that you should leave your hair the way it is. http://isthisfashion.com/fashion-insider/wet-hair-as-fashion/


 * Exaggerated Effects**
 * **Some day are fashion designers going to have to make shirts out of sponge**
 * **Eww, did you just go to the gym and sweat a rainstorm.**

The Wet Head is Dead

Did you just go to the gym and sweat a rainstorm? Soon, fashion designers are going to have to make shirts out of sponge so your back doesn't get wet. Now a days, people are leaving their hair down after swimming, or taking showers. Some are even buying products to make their hair look wet and add the wetness on their back to look "cool". Do you have to close your eyes when you see someones back wet? media type="custom" key="22014772" You're not alone. Because I do.

First of all, it's really disgusting to look at, for example, wherever I am if I see a girl who has a wet spot on her back I admittedly turn away. In the article " Wet hair as Fashion" they say "Wet hair is the new trend". Models, celebrities, and even regular people are buying products to make their hair look wet. Personally think that you should leave your hair the way it is.

Secondly it proves that the person is lazy because if the person knows their hair is wet and doesn't even bother to at least put it up in a ponytail or bun.Wendy Rose Gould says "Not to rub your hair to dry it". But I think that you should at least put your hair up in a towel to dry or even pull your hair back in a bun.

Let's be serious. Laziness with hair is not acceptable.

Lastly, when you actually have the wet spot on your back, it feels disgusting. Imagine this, the wetness of the shirt sticks to your skin and makes your back wet and cold. I have had it done to myself after swim team, when it was cold outside. When I went outside I froze into an ice cube.

Look, wet hair isn't that cool.

Don't try the "cool" look; people won't look at you.

But, you'll be just ahead of piercings.

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