fm315+Pet+Peeves


 * Thesis** (What You're Trying to Prove)

(I believe that) Some sounds are really annoying.
 * Three Reasons**
 * Distracts me when I'm working Ex: brother
 * It hurts my ears Ex. people screaming
 * The noise is totally unnecessary. Ex: girls at mall


 * Facts/Experts/Opinions**


 * KidsHealth.org says,**
 * That when you go to a concert, you need to wear ear protection because you might have tinnitus. Tinnitus means ringing in the ears. When you have tinnitus, you can have permanent hearing loss. That's what happen to a**

http://kidshealth.org/kid/talk/qa/rock_music.html


 * Exaggerated Effects**
 * If this keeps going on my ears are going to fall off!
 * If the musics to loud my head is going to blow!


 * Loud Noises**

Huh? I can't hear you, can you repeat that?

Have you ever felt that the music is too loud your ears are going to fall? Have you ever felt that your head is going to blow? Well, I have. Did you know that you can get something called tinnitus? Tinnitus means ringing in the ears.

Do you want to get tinnitus?

One reason why some sounds are annoying is because it distracts me when I'm working. An example is my brother. My brother likes to listen to music when I'm doing homework, or when I'm busy doing something. Another example is when people are watching TV around you. It's annoying because you might get distracted on what's on TV. Suppose you were in my place how would you feel?

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A second reason is it hurts my ears. An example is people screaming. When people scream it feels like my ears are going to fall off, and my head is going to blow. Also, another example is when people blast music. It bothers me because I feel like I'm going to get tinnitus.

And the last reason is the noise is totally unnecessary. An example is at the mall. When girls scream, when they just saw each other at school like an hour ago. A another example is when girls scream for no reason at all. It makes me feel annoyed because really... you need to scream that bad!

It's not that hard, Just don't scream!

Did you know that a lot of famous singers have got tinnitus? If you like blasting your music. Well, don't come to me when you get tinnitus.

In conclusion, loud noises can really effect your hearing, especially when your at a concert. That's why famous singers wear hearing aids, and have you ever noticed that people in the crowd wear ear muffs, or ear plugs?