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Thesis (What You're Trying to Prove)

I believe that smoking is very rude.

It makes other people have a bad feeling about you Example-one day when I went to Ruby Tuesdays, there were smokers outside, and I wanted to stay as far as possible from them It makes others choke from the smoke Example-I was walking to Kings and there was a smoker who passed by me. I inhaled some smoke and started to cough a lot

Many people die from inhaling the smoke from cigarettes Example-On the news, I saw a man almost dying from inhaling smoke and was suing the smoker

Facts/Experts/Opinions
 * 1,000 people die each day from inhaling the smoke that come from cigarettes.
 * Smoking ruins the local environment

Exaggerated Effects
 * I'll be needing a gas mask from now on 24/7.
 * A circle that makes smokers stay away 1 mile from me would be nice.


 * Soak the Smoke!**

Many things are rude in this world. But nowadays it should be smoking. Smoking is as bad as watching T.V. for the rest of your life. I mean, it's ruining everything around here. The plants, the atmosphere, and even people too! Now days, smokers just want to lounge around, not get a job, not have a life, and just smoke. Man, smoking for a living? Not my type of interest. If there's a king of rudeness, it's smoking. Soak the Smoke, people!

Don't you just have this eerie and unsettling feeling when your around smokers? Yeah, me too. One day, I was going to Ruby Tuesdays to eat dinner. We parked the car, got out, and headed for the door. Around the door was a bunch of smokers. That's when I got the eerie and unsettling feeling. I practically ran when I was near them. I was so relieved when I got inside. I might be needing a magical circle that makes smokers stay 1 mile away from me. That would be nice.

Did you know that the smoke from the cigarettes makes you cough like a lunatic? I bet you did. Suppose you were walking to Kings to pick up some ice cream, and a smoker passed you while he was letting out a breathe of smoke. You inhale it, and 3, 2, 1... Cough fest begins! Smoking ruins other people and the local environment. He then just threw his butted cigarette onto the grass, and I could already see the grass wilting as quickly as a raindrop falling from the sky.

Many people die from the smoke that is being exhaled from the smokers. Almost 1,000 people die from that same smoke. Each day! We'll be an extinct species sooner or later! Do you want to end up like the dinosaurs? I wouldn't. Smoking is as worse as breaking your leg. Wait, it's worse!

On a Saturday morning, while I was watching the news, I saw a man suing a smoker for almost killing him from the smoke that the smoker exhaled. Smoking causes heart disease and lung cancer to not just the smoker, but to the people around him/her. Even children are dying!

Maybe you smokers should stop smoking.

You should!

Maybe if you stopped, you could save thousands of people lives.

You should!

Maybe you could save the human race!

Probably not, but you might!

Or maybe from now on I'll be needing a gas mask 24/7 just from that horrible thing.

Maybe one day there'll be a town called GasMaskville. media type="custom" key="22014730"