im115+Argumentative+Essay

Dear Producer,
==In our 6th grade class, we read //Island of the Blue Dolphins//. Then we watched your movie, our class realized that the book was better than the movie. Wow, what a surprise I liked reading more. Your movie may be good, but it could get better with a little elbow grease. What would happen if you took away more details? Believe it or not I think you should remake the movie.==

==Well, the first thing I would recommend is that the movie should be truer to the book. You should include all or more details from the book to the movie. The movie would sound better if there was a voice over. Also this movie should be more life-like. I can understand that you didn't want a big budget for this movie, but if you added more money to it, I'd watch it.==

==Another improvement to the movie would be newer technology. This generation has so many new pieces of technology, why not use it for something fun to watch? You could use C.G.I. Maybe a clearer camera could work. But definatly better sound would be a big improvement. I know that in 1964 technology wasn't too evolved, but since then technology advanced and so did people's taste in movies.==

==Some readers wouldn't be too happy with the old movie. The old movie skipped through tons of action packed scenes. One missing scene was the Tsunami. Or the Devil Fish which was a very big part in the book. //Island of the Blue Dolphin// movie was okay, but needed way more action.==

==Even though I enjoyed the movie a little, it needs some work. But I have to say if you remake the movie it'll probably make you more money. Wouldn't you want to gain more money and fame? I am not telling to remake the movie because you're an adult and I have no right to tell you what to do, but I suggest you remake it.==