mc215+Pet+Peeves


 * Thesis** (What You're Trying to Prove)


 * I believe that hypocrites are very annoying people.**


 * Three Reasons**
 * 1) **They tell you not to do something and then they do it. Example: My brother told me not to try the password on his computer and then I turn around and he is trying my password to my Surface.**
 * 2) **They think that they have their own special privileges. Example: I went to a party and someone told me not to go in the pool and then they jumped right in.**
 * 3) **Hypocrites think that they can not be criticized by other people, but can criticize. Example: I once was criticized for hitting a bad golf shot, but then the person hit a ball into the woods.**


 * Facts/Experts/Opinions**
 * **Studies show that people can't blame themselves for hypocrisy.**
 * **Richard Petty says that hypocrites are less likely to be forgiven than anyone else.**
 * @http://www.time.com/time/magazine/article/0,9171,1659716,00.html


 * Exaggerated Effects**
 * **They make kids want to go home on vacation**.
 * **They wish that they could own the entire world.**


 * Hypocrites: Annoying People at a Place near You**


 * Since when are people supposed to be annoying?**


 * That's what your like if you are hypocrite. I run into so many of them and they don't even care about anyone else. Everyone can be a hypocrite at times, even me. But some people just do it all the time and I just hate that.**


 * I believe that hypocrites are very annoying people.**


 * Studies show that people can't blame themselves for being hypocritical, but they can! People can change what they're like. It's like saying you can't break a bad habit. It's like saying I can't change the way I am. You can! It's not hard. You just have to try. Maybe you don't want to, but you can. Many people have done it. Don't get me wrong that some people can't change, but most people can.**


 * Hypocrites just tell you not to do something and then guess what? They're doing what they told you not to do! How annoying! All people hate hypocrites, and then some of them are hypocrites themselves. Just listen to the Golden Rule. Treat others how you want to be treated. Just don't be a hypocrite. If everyone hates them, don't be one! I can't get any simpler. One time, someone told me not to try my password, and I didn't ad then he turned around and tried my password. Don't try my password while I'm trying yours! Might as well go try the password of the White House or something! I am just trying to make it simple.**


 * It's not hard.**


 * They think that they can do whatever they want and people aren't going to care, and then they go criticize someone else. They just think that they have their own special rules. It's just like those athletes who think that they are the best so they go get drunk. Again, special rules. Do you think that people who think that they have their own special rules are annoying? Well then you think hypocrites are annoying. Richard Petty, a psychologist at Ohio State University, says that hypocrites are less likely to be forgiven than anyone else. People love to be forgiven so just don't be a hypocrite.**


 * It's not hard. Just do it.**

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 * OK. I admit that I am sometimes a hypocrite. Everyone is. At least I know that I'm did the wrong thing afterwords which leads me to my third reason. They think that they can't be criticized, but they can criticize. I hated it that one time I hit a bad shot in golf and they person behind me said I stank and then they hit the ball right in the woods. Well they sure do stink at golf. At least I hit a better shot. Another time someone else criticized me while I was playing football, and they were the worst player at the camp. How stupid? Hypocrites might as well go criticize a trash can for having garbage inside.**
 * How stupid?**


 * You at least have to be good at something before you can criticize someone else. Everyone hates hypocrites, and I am just one of them.**