kt115+Persuasive+Writing

__Citizenship Essay __
==In an effort to reduce bulling and violence at school, a school has made up a "Citizenship Credits". So our school wants to adopt this way in our school and I personally don't like it, and I have some reasons to tell you later on in this essay. A Citizenship Credit is going to provide information about classmates who break rules, display inappropriate behavior, or use bad language. They are all collected and redeemed for a grade point or two on your report card. I believe that the Citizenship is a bad thing for Bedminster School. ==

==It could destroy your friendship with someone. If you start to tattle tale on your friend for doing something wrong, they might not like you anymore which is bad if you like that friend. Or you could be doing something bad and then when your friend will tattle on you. Imagine a school with no bulling, bad language, and bad actions. How would you feel if your were in school and your friend told on you? ==

==Also, You will not be able to do anything fun in class. You would get told on for doing stuff fun, like yelling out because it is fun when you don't get in trouble. What if you want to dance during free time in class? You can't dance for fool around. Every one wants a fun class so the class will be plain, old, and boring if you are not allowed to do anything because of the Citizenship Credits. ==

==There will be more punishments and then school wouldn't be fun.If you are having fun and you say shut up to them and you get punished that is not fair if you get in trouble. Also,You might not be able to do anything and if you do something very small, you could get punished. One last example would be that you would always be in trouble or in the office. ==

==I believe that the Citizenship is a bad thing for Bedminster School. All those the reasons hopefully helped you think about not doing this " Citizenship Credit" thing. It would be ridiculous because the school will be crazy about telling on other people for doing something little or big. The main reason I don't like the "Citizenship Credit" because we have a HIB report that only focuses on the major problems. I believe that the Citizenship is a bad thing for Bedminster School. ==