fn315+Argumentative+Writing

==After we read the book and saw the movie, I realized that there are a lot of things missing. The movie producer left out three major events. They left out out the tsunami, devilfish scene, and the sea elephant fight. I believe that the movie should be remade onto these three major events.==

==One problem is that they left out the devilfish part! If they added the devilfish part it would make the the movie exciting. Also, people would want to see the movie. It would also show how Karana cared for Rontu.==

==Another problem is that they left out the sea elephant fight. For example, if they added the fight, people would actually like the movie, rather than them not liking it. Another example is it would make the movie more interesting to watch. Some people may think that the sea elephant scene was too dangerous, but it's really not with the technology we have today.==

==The most serious problem is that they left out the tsunami part! If the tsunami part was in the movie, they would've got a lot of rates. It would bring the suspense to the movie, and did you know there's something called computer animations? The tsunami part would've been the most craziest part in the movie, but they didn't add which made the rates lower.==

==Some people may think that these three scenes are hard to direct, but now a days there's a lot of technology you can use to make these scenes. Also, some people may think that it's too violent, but with the technology we have today, it wouldn't make it too violent. I believe that the movie __Island of the Blue Dolphins__ by Scott O' Dell should be remade because they left out three major scenes.==