jj115 argumentative essay

=Argumentative essay =

Dear producer, We read the book //Island of the Blue Dolphins// in class and then watched the movie. //Island of the Blue Dolphins// was okay but needs some improvement. It could be turned into a very successful movie. A lot of the fans of //The Island of the Blue Dolphins// would come back to see the movie. I believe //Island of the Blue Dolphins// should return.

One idea to make this movie better is to get new actors. For example, Karana was not the best actor for the part. Also, Tutok could have been better. Last, you should have added Ulape in the movie. This is why I think there should be different casting.

The next idea is it should be truer to the story. For one, you should add in the 2nd ship that comes for Karana and the few scenes in California at the end. Some people might think this is a minor part but Rontu is from the north. In addition, Rontu should have been more like a wolf. Finally, you should add Nanko and Ulape. This is why it should be more true to the book.

Last you should add more existing scenes. Like the devil fish story. Another thing is you should add the sea elephant story. Last the tsunami should be added. Some people think that sea elephants fighting is violent but Karana does not see it all in the book. This is why you should add more existing scenes.

Even though you might think you're not going to make a profit. But many people would go to see a good survival movie. Do you really want to make a profit.Then remake Island of the Blue Dolphins.