kb115+Argumentative+Essay

==**In our class we read //Island of the Blue Dolphins//. We also watched the movie and noticed several differences between the two. Have you ever compared the two of them? If so you probably noticed some of the major details missing. I have have noticed some companies these days remaking their movies.This movie may have the old- fashion look to it, but a little something extra would make this movie very good.**==

==**One thing missing from the movie that was in the book is having events that are more grabbing for teens and kids. A way to give this movie some spice is to give it narrations. This movie could also use some action. If a movie in The Box Office can make millions of dollars with a lot action so can this movie. First for the movie to do that it must have suspense. In my opinion, this movie could really use a little more of something.**==

==**These days many companies use technology to make their movies stunning. Imagine what Karana would look like if you made her look older. If you have technology, you could use it to make the lighting in the movie better. Also, with technology you can use effects to make music. Overall, using technology could really make the movie awesome.**==

==**If you were to use details from the book, the movie would be way truer to the book than it is. In the movie there are a lot of inconsistencies. Including, no canoe trip. If there was an Ulape like the book, the pieces of the movie would fit together more like a puzzle. Also, if there was a Nanko the story would continue with him saying, " The ship will come back for Ramo." In my opinion, the movie would be a lot truer to the book if the details fit together better.**==

==Even though **the movie is good and somewhat true the book, it could include a lot more detail from the book. Would you like to have the movie somewhat compatible with the book? Think of all the money a movie like this can make. First you need to include all of these ideas first.**==

Sincerely**, **

 * Katie **

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